Commnet on Merve's Fire of Anatolia Journal

Dear Merve,
I am totally agree with you. I also think that Fire of Anatolia is the best dance group in Turkey and is one of the best groups in the world. I had the opportunity to watch them live in the opening ceremony of EYOF 2011. They performed a perfect show there and fascinated everybody. You organized your paragraph well. First you mentioned its history and aim and lastly the countries they have performed a show. As I am also a fan of Fire of Anatolia, I liked your paragraph very much. I couldn't find any mistake. The video you chose was also good but I think it could be better. As a whole your journal is very good.